"Science Magazine for Teenagers" experiment

[GarryP]

Here's a silly thing that I was playing around with yesterday afternoon.

The brief I gave myself - it's just an experiment, not a real thing - was for a double-page spread in a "factual but fun magazine for teenagers". It's got to the point now that I'm sure it's missing something but I don't know what.

Can anyone make any suggestions?

Some things I already know that need work are: (1) Image isolation isn't great (it was quick and dirty just to get something to see). (2) I'm not entirely happy with the title graphics. (3) I need a better "wormhole".

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