Thanks heaps for your feedback! I do like the points you have made, some I am already aware of but others had no idea.
The font is called Prototype I found it on 1001 free fonts and for what I was after seem to do the job perfectly.
The magazine itself will be $3.99 digital and the company that I am publishing through place the barcode on the back page freeing up the front page for me
The second evansorrell.com in on my original artwork, I did not even realise I had left it there! haha.
Thank you so much for your comments, I now have a few things to fix and I really appreciate the feedback!